Sunday, November 10, 2024

A River Runs Through It

 Letting it rest on the piano. From a photo by Derek Poznanski.  Buildings in photo much darker and maybe I’ll do that.


3 comments:

  1. The buildings and water are good, but somehow that tree, despite its colors does not seem to be popping, not sure why or what to do about it.

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  2. Really lovely but the buildings need to be darker. Contrast = drama…

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  3. I really like this. I like the composition and the way the oranges move through the painting, calmed down by the blue greys of the buildings and water. Thinking of sunset lighting, I wonder if the buildings should be more backlit and darker or if that would just be too "illustration."

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