Well, I did a little work on both of these At home. I reworked the background color and darkened the coat on the lady. I like it. I might do a bigger version of this, not sure. The proportions on this are way off- I feel she’s way too big and so is the background…
I toned down the background on the fish and tried to give him a little more presence, I think it works but I won’t be spending any more time on him…
I like what you've done with the lady. There's a nice passage of dark through her coat that ties everything together nicely. I think you're right about making her smaller. It seemed to suit the narrative better. I like the softer background for the fish, but I still can't unsee that element of cannibalism LOL!
ReplyDeleteI really like what you did with the wooded hills behind her. I don’t think that she’s too big but rather just right.
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