So close! I just have a few tiny tweaks left—oh, and I still have to resolve that whole lower right corner. I think this needs a person waiting for the train. Next week for sure!
I know you know where I stand on putting people in your paintings, because once you put that person in all people will be thinking about what is that person thinking about. Are they heading home after a long dreary day at work? Are they heading to work where they will be marching right into the boss's office and demanding that raise that is long overdue and if they don't get it they will be walking right out the door? Right out the door and they damn well mean it?
Or maybe it's two people, that changes the whole story. And then where? I think far down the the right side so there will not be so much to see of them so the viewer will have more to wonder about them.
I think you should borrow one of Alan’s speed skaters and have them zooming down the platform! or Put a couple of red tail lights in the distance, so we know this person is thinking, Damn! I just missed the train!
I know you know where I stand on putting people in your paintings, because once you put that person in all people will be thinking about what is that person thinking about. Are they heading home after a long dreary day at work? Are they heading to work where they will be marching right into the boss's office and demanding that raise that is long overdue and if they don't get it they will be walking right out the door? Right out the door and they damn well mean it?
ReplyDeleteOr maybe it's two people, that changes the whole story. And then where? I think far down the the right side so there will not be so much to see of them so the viewer will have more to wonder about them.
I think you should borrow one of Alan’s speed skaters and have them zooming down the platform! or Put a couple of red tail lights in the distance, so we know this person is thinking, Damn! I just missed the train!
ReplyDeleteOr….. could put two headlights coming out of the tunnel with the person thinking “Goody, I’m here in the nick of time.
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