I don't think the first one is too smooth. There's texture there. I like the way the mountain in the background is soft and distant. Maybe you could have more value differences in the greenery and the trees, and maybe less even spacing on the trees, but I like it, overall. Same for the bottom one. I like it, but think the rocks on the bottom one are too even; same for the branches--they're all the same thickness all the way from trunk to tip. With all that said, though, I like this series a lot and the more sophisticated color palette you're using.
I don't think the first one is too smooth. There's texture there. I like the way the mountain in the background is soft and distant. Maybe you could have more value differences in the greenery and the trees, and maybe less even spacing on the trees, but I like it, overall. Same for the bottom one. I like it, but think the rocks on the bottom one are too even; same for the branches--they're all the same thickness all the way from trunk to tip. With all that said, though, I like this series a lot and the more sophisticated color palette you're using.
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