One of the downfalls of my abstract paintings is I start out well enough but then when I have most of the stuff in I tend to tidy stuff up finish it up and it loses it's spunk. I think of it as order vs chaos, and I am putting too much order into them and they're boring.
So I am going to watch myself on these four and try to keep them more free. I think if I do four at one time I'll be better able to watch myself.
The original plan on these to begin with I would use four colors to put in the foreground: Sepia, perylene maroon, olive green, and something else, and in the background: indigo, cadmium red, gamboge, and something else. Anyway I had a plan at first, and this is what each one looked like after the first session.
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And this is what they look like after 2 to 4 more sessions. I think they are all almost done as long as I don't try to sneak in any tidying. I think that is the key. Remember Glengarry Glen Ross where the bigshot real estate guy has this slogan: Always Be Closing, ABC? My slogan is Never Be Closing, NBC. I never think about ending any of them, like this part is finished now let's do this next one, and three or four more and then it will be done. I just paint on and on and suddenly it occurs to me that this one looks done and setting my brush down right there and then.








I absolutely notice the chaos/control theme with your paintings and I am cheering on team chaos. However, that said, I think you're most successful when the "control" element involves bold shape(s) and value contrast. And I realize that I need to see these in person before I can truly judge them, given recent color shifts we've noticed.
ReplyDeleteI really like the first one and the last one. They show what Elaine is talking about: controlling the dominant shapes and darker values.if your background is all these luscious colors, there needs to be a dominant shape or line to hold the piece together.. the middle two just don’t have that cohesive ness. Even an abstract painting needs structure.
ReplyDeleteYes I vote with Sara. 1 and 4. Maybe 2 in the second run. Maybe looking for a connection from one section to the next.
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