I, too, like the energetic brushwork of the first one. It seems to me, though, that the additions from last week changed the perspective. Now I'm looking up and into the full canopy; before I was looking at the trees head on and from a distance. I think I prefer last week's, just because it felt more active. Like the colors on the second one but the shapes seem too clearly defined (with all the action going on strictly inside those shapes). I guess I'd like to see more integration between shapes so they don't look like separate elements that aren't relating to each other.
I, too, like the energetic brushwork of the first one. It seems to me, though, that the additions from last week changed the perspective. Now I'm looking up and into the full canopy; before I was looking at the trees head on and from a distance. I think I prefer last week's, just because it felt more active. Like the colors on the second one but the shapes seem too clearly defined (with all the action going on strictly inside those shapes). I guess I'd like to see more integration between shapes so they don't look like separate elements that aren't relating to each other.
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