I saw this old painting of mine displayed on a large computer screen and recognized immediately what was wrong with it. So…. I went into my archives and hauled it out. After a little while I think I made it better. Be careful using ink to do the small branches of a tree. I was trying to get the first green of spring but I lost that with the branches so prominent. I also did some work on the foreground.
Before
After
I’m still working on Greeta. I might have to use more pigment on the blouse but I really like it and don’t want to screw it up.